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Oceanic Château of Seduction

Mystery beckons her youthful flesh
tingling with percussions of lust

As waves soothe sultry dragons
breathing steamy flames of desire
between seething thighs

Intoxication guide her thoughts
to seductive realms of erotic madness

Echoes reverberate off the horizon
from a floating castle of promiscuity

As the Baron of salaciousness
whisper upon wading tides of intrigue

Beguiling the soul of this exotic princess
with fantasies of wantonness
too volcanic to utter

The violent rage of splashing waves
summon her to infinite pleasures

As one of many delicacies seized
into infamy by the Baron of
unimaginable splendors

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  • Galaxy2
    November 8, 2008
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    carefully chosen words...
    brilliant!


  • ennovy silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    Classical & Erotic

    Beautifully done with a tale in tow; that made me think...of fairy tales.....Thanks for entering...Novy & Brazos


  • Wolfdog silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. You expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.