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Loving Lonely

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Words through whisperings from her loving lips,
hearing tenderness from a distant song
When my spirit hits the floor, raindrops drip,
you mend my dreams before the dew of dawn.

You're the sacred angel who graces me,
where would I be without your hymns sincere...?
Isolated, still you hear my heart's plea,
kissing away pain and drying each tear.

Eyes fill with laughter within your smile,
for there's where my hope is fulfilled anew
Across the miles your words beguile,
as I tune my guitar to loving you.

Strumming my heartstrings with grace and finesse,
I dream of your world, my soul must confess.

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Background by: http://allpoetry.com/theredcatjazzoflove


Dedicated to my dear friend, Soledad.
Her link here:
http://allpoetry.com/Lonely

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 6
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    Excellent write here

    You pen your words with such grace and love

  • carole21
    November 20, 2008
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    nicely penned . .


  • Mad Moon silver member
    November 10, 2008

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    .......sigh..... My goodness, dear brother; this is absolute love penned within these words. You always touch my heart, as I'm sure you touched hers. Just gorgeous brother-o-mine. I so needed to read this today! Love you, dear man!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    yes poeticweave this is a lovely poem.
    smile,
    Judy


  • Scyphon
    November 9, 2008

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    Very well written, a gorgeous poem. It touches the heart even tho it wasnt meant for me, it gives me a smile and pleasure to read such beauty.

  • michaeline
    November 9, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute to your friend.Any one would be proud to recieve something this sweet.Your respect and feelings are well wriiten throughout and the care that you showed in writing this is great.I do not think I would change anything in this.The title that you chose was thought of with love and the words spoken speaks volumes.Great job on this.


  • moon2u
    November 9, 2008
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    You have a big heart Timothy and this is such a sensitive tribute to your friend
    hugs Moony


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 9, 2008

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    i think this is something, i mean really she must have really liked this poem, and who wouldn't keep it flowing


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    Ah, Timothy,
    your words are pure artistry.

    M-C


  • poeticpieces
    November 8, 2008

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    Excellent Words Flowing Together!

    Great Job! Keep up the great works.
    Love to read your love songs.

    Peace, poeticpieces.


  • Aimee Hill
    November 8, 2008

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    Of course, Mr. Weaver... this poem is full of beauty. As if I expected anything less?? I know Soledad must have been lying in awe while reading this one. Beautifully penned Mr.! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, much like I do for all of your poems. (which I still have to catch up on)

    Simply Sweet.
    Keep penning!!


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    I drean if your world ...my soul I must confess. What a wonderful dedication to surely what must be a very dear friendship indeed! Love it~ ~Sie


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Very contenting ...

    Very endearing write here friend. I just loved it.
    You have a remarkable way with words.

    God bless ...

    ~ James ~


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    What beautiful words you have chosen to dedicate to your friend. I am not familiar with her work, but I will definitely be checking it out.
    She has to be extraordinary to inspire such intense and sincere words from you.
    A wonderful and enchanting piece.
    Soulful Woman


  • Wandika gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    Longing for love

    comes through with your words.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    Beautiful and heartfelt words for your friend
    here. A lovely dedication that I am sure will
    touch her heart in so many ways! Well done
    and keep up the wonderful work here bro!




    Jeremy0826


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    ah Now

    I read where she is in tune with your poetry, and to know it is special is awesome, you sweet soul, are so good to your friends,thank you for sharing as I love these poems...
    Linda


  • Sunkissedrose
    November 8, 2008

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    WOW! I have always always loved your beautiful poems. How lucky your friend is to have such beautiful inspirational words penned for her. Great Write!


  • Stardust-luvr
    November 8, 2008

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    Intense tears flow as your words are read for your heart speaks in milliniums the wonders of hope and the magic you you bring forth to others and others bring forth to you. love you hun tenfold and more for you are a remarkable friend and brother my rainbow for life. well written and many blessings always to you and to your friend, Soledad ~"Lonely" much love always xxxxx


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Hey you:!

     

    This is so tender, the flow is good,

    and you captured this readers eyes

    with eacvh and every word.....

     

    A great read for  a romantic soul,

    good words touching paradise.....

     

    Blessed be my dear sweet Tim,

    Your forever friend,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya

     


  • mina nagi gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Wow, what an excellent tribute to "Soledad - Lonely" it's beautifully worded... She's the nicest person one could wish to have as a friend....

    "Strumming my heartstrings with grace and finesse,
    I dream of your world, my soul must confess."

    very well executed...

    mina


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Sweet and beautiful, I'm sure she will cherish this piece of art you have inscribed for her. I am always amazed by your everchanging use of your heart. You always have a way of making everyone person you come to let into your heart feel like they hold it completely in their hands. Thanks for sharing and I am so proud you are my AP dad. I sure did pick the best!!!
    Hugs!
    Cayla


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Mushy! you have your writing soul back dude! okay you know we're going to have some jealous lemon heads right you sucker! I so love it hon she brings out the joy in your writing here i love it


  • Lonely
    November 8, 2008

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    Awww. Tim I dont have words to thank you for this lovely lovely dedication.. This has brought tears in my eyes, tears of happiness.. I do not know what to say about this.. Its lovely! You are such a dear person Love ya!
    Thanks you so much!
    Love,
    Lonely

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