When time begin on me and you
True love was blessed but I knew
you didn't have the heart to see it through
I knew soon you would want someone new.
But you held on, wouldn't let me go
Even when you left out the door
leaving my heart to drop through the floor
as i knew were you went, trying to find something more
Each time you returned I ignored the lies
avoiding the look in your eyes
ignoring the outcries
but still i couldn't say my goodbyes
Im begging, Im pleading you
This river ever flowing so blue
this situation im trying to construe
but i got to say were through
So please just set me free and let me be.
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FallenEngel
A contest entry
- For only poets up for a challenge by PureRomance.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what ya think?
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The struggle of the sentiments between the desires and truths of life..you again touched the reality of this life..thanks for sharing..
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This is a beautiful write and so full of emotions.
When you are in a relationship you're not willingly wanting to leave it makes it all so hard and complicated. It takes strength and courage to see the light at the end of the tunnel.
The best of luck in the contest!
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beautiful poem<3
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This is just amazing and you took the prompt given to new heights. Best wishes to you in this contest.
Riftkin
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Oh Wow!
You did an excellent job with this poem and the imagery and rhyme scheme in it is absolutely perfect in my opinion. You did great. Keep up the excellent work and best wishes to you in the contest. God bless you always in everything you do and write.
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