I see a woman in a dress,
mind starts to dream about less.
I wonder and I start to guess
What she would be like.
Then the wind begins to blow.
I stop and look, I want to know.
I wonder if she will show
What she would be like.
Is it real or fantasy?
Could she ever be with me?
I wonder the possibility,
What she would be like.
Wind blows the dress above her head,
Find out that her name is Fred.
The fantasy now is dead.
More beautiful undressed?
Dreams you have in your mind,
not always what you will find.
The truth is not always kind,
sometimes more is less!
Author notes
What we think is not always true. Don't judge a book by it's cover...or coverings! LOL
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LOL
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Well this is the another angle of the truth you shared my friend..yet very thoughtful I find..well done ..and thanks for this poetry..
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Hilarious... I was thinking oooh ya and then, oh my gosh! Great message! Loved it.
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LMAO, this makes me laugh. Damn typical that [he]she was in such a way. Still, could be worse... Couldn't it? I'm sure! Haha, yeah sometimes the truth kicks us up the butt!
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This is a great way to portray a good message. LOL.
I love you and good luck
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OH! I did not see the end coming in this one. great job, brother dear.
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Haha, I agree with you- sometimes you just feel like you have to have an opinion about something... and then it turns out that you were way wrong ! Yeah, the feeling's bad, but don't it teach you to learn not to be so assumptious in the future yeah..
Great poem by the way!
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