She parted the incoming tide
Parted her lips like the great divide
She parted her legs to open wide
Parted to flow with all her pride
As the seas rolled in, she stood still
accepting one and all as she always will
Wading deeper into life's mystery
accepting that this was what she had to be
He drove into the on rushing tide
Splashing in the foam from deep inside
Her sea called now just to him
and with gushing joy he filled her to the rim
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Poems by ennovy.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 19 entries
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700 points, ended January 13, 23 entries
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Comments
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this is great, sensual and hot, short and sweet, well written with good flow and rhyme
wonderfull
well done, thanks for entering and good luck
xxx
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Accepting that this was what she had to be
this is the line I relate to the most as the others in this writing burn in me
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Nice metaphorical write... sensual without blatancy... Well done.
Ken
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Wow...rhyme becomes you dear friend! Very refreshing!
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Wonderfully writen foster brother. Short yet sweet. I like this line...
Wading deeper into life's mystery....
It really speaks.
much love to you and all the best in the contest.
your foster sister Anne
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This is really good here! Short but still good
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Short but fscinating erotica....
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Nice!
This was a very poetic write filled
with sensual undertones of passion.
The images were exotically provocative.
I think you did a great job
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Thank for entering our contest.....your imagery is surely on the erotic side....Novy & Brazos
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