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You Give Me More Than Love

We first met when you were still young.
Our eyes met and I was completely undone.
You kissed me and nuzzled my ear,
as I giggled and held you near.

Our love was plain for all to see.
I brought you home to meet family.
We share a life that feels complete,
with no other joy that can compete.

In a nearby park we take long walks,
and have our special little talks.
You've brought my life such solemn peace
I know this happiness shall ne'er surcease

There so much more than love we share
Happiness, joy and a tender care
I now end my long prologue
With an 'I Love You Sinful, my beloved Dog!'




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Lady-Pegasus / I read this ( in re: the rules and description)

OK, so not what you might have been expecting, but my muse is not in a love-song type of mood atm, sorry. Hope you enjoyed it any way! LP

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  • HomeGrown
    November 19, 2008

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    Man I love dogs! I don't think I'd even name one Sinful, but I know some pretty sin filled cat-eaters. Really enjoyed the write, and appreciated the talent and the flow that it wears. Well done, friend.


  • PureRomance
    November 9, 2008

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    This was a loving and adorable dedication to your canine friend. May God bless you always in all that you do and write and keep up the excellent work. Best of luck to you in the contest.