at the end of our roads
there is time to reflected
to forgive and forget
and release all the hurt
that time we are given
just a moment or two
to remember and face
the lives that we lived
regrets and the hate
we leave all behind
we shrug of the guilt
embraces within graces
those moments are precious
nothing to waste
there we gather the memories
and love that we take
Author notes
credit : http://paperplease.deviantart.com/art/End-Of-The-Road-101072311
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #7 by Aussie Gypsy.
900 points, ended November 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a good piece, there was a gramatical error I noticed but nothing serious. Best to you in the contest
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pretty..., in the last stanza just two things though:
"waste" instead of "wasted" would work better (it's ur poem though, so it doesn't matter if you change it or not)
and then "gatherer" should be "gather" right?
great poem, good luck in the contest!
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