Song thrush; sits in golden ore;
singing her song, angelic choir.
Fingers bronzing, arms reaching out,
cold breath, leaves silent whispers.
Cocooned in satin coloured wings,
protected from icy dawn, faces change.
Beams of twinkling curtains drawn.
Therapeutic music plays, soothes heart.
Silent beauty, mirror of perfection
reflects in frozen tears.
Aqua blue shimmers on bare branches
rivers still feed veins keeping heart true.
Author notes
ENTWINING BEAUTY
I READ
Beauty Inside Us All
A contest entry
- For only poets up for a challenge by PureRomance.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You have outdone yourself with this poem, tis truly a work of art, I enjoyed it so much, blessings with Love John
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I agree with the previous posters. You did a marvelous job with this brilliant masterpiece. The imagery in this was so brilliantly clear and it painted a scene like a paint by number masterpiece and I enjoyed reading every line. It drew me in like a moth to the flame. God bless you in all that you do and write and best of luck to you in the contest.
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This shows beauty that is entwining as your prompt requested and so much more. best of luck to you with this here poem.
Riftkin
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thank you so much
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A most beautiful post. it conjures up some most wonderful imagery. well done and i wish you good luck in the contest too.
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