Murdered by the climate
among ways go as serpentine,
looking loneliness
to let an isolation conquer,
grows till rain kisses
singing my stubs to bloom.
Everything around tired
deaf mute
drowned in dark
ragged of dry feelings
encountering different
freshly crushed
under a silence nailed.
Broken spells crying
bouquet of spider
enough to break
equilibrium of groaning sphere.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
http://kil1k.deviantart.com/art/Forgotten-tree-46169645
A contest entry
- picture prompt by transit.
690 points, ended December 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The imgery is powerful and it realy brought out the tree and surroundings.
Thank you for sticking with the lines and still coming up with an amazing piece of art 
This poem is also abstract which makes it interesting and up to our imagination even without the pictre. God luck!!
transit~
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