There was this promise given
of a world shared
of a place
of total joy,
peace
and love.
And a death
sealed the deal
allowed us
to have access to this world.
Now, I wonder
is it possible
for this world to exist.
Is it possible
that I may enter?
I wish too
no doubt about that.
The tales told
of a perfect world
has peaked my interest.
But I wonder,
would He share his world
with me?
Author notes
written by trekkergirl and I did read the rules.... prompt: sharing my world with you.
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A contest entry
- For only poets up for a challenge by PureRomance.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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This was a beautiful poem. You did a marvelous job I hope to read more from you soon. God bless you always in all that you do and write and keep up the excellent work.
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Well written as is all your poems, you have magic within your keyboard, keep up the beautiful poetry, blessings John
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