From a baby this was to be her fame.
So straight was her frame.
All day long , she went on so.
Dancing on heels and toes.
Time has move as she danced about.
The music she heard stirs on in her.
Still dancing as the plaster falls
On,she will dance without a roof or walls
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Anyone? by Ylova.
655 points, ended November 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice take on the picture. I really liked the last line. Great imagery throughout the entire poem. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck
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I would love to dance without roof nor walls; wonderful take on the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
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best of luck in the contest
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beautiful poem good luck in the contest
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Beautiful on the prompt dear... Good luck in the contest!
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Wow. Well written with great imagery and structure. You're take on the picture prompt was well planned out. Keep it up and good luck in the contest!
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