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All She Can Do is Dance

From a baby this was to be her fame.
So straight was her frame.
All day long , she went on so.
Dancing on heels and toes.

Time has move as she danced about.
The music she heard stirs on in her.
Still dancing as the plaster falls
On,she will dance without a roof or walls

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  • chilali
    November 10, 2008

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    Nice take on the picture. I really liked the last line. Great imagery throughout the entire poem. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck


  • Canadamomma
    November 8, 2008

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    I would love to dance without roof nor walls; wonderful take on the prompt
    Best of luck in the contest


  • banrion
    November 8, 2008
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    best of luck in the contest


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 8, 2008
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    beautiful poem good luck in the contest


  • crimsondew
    November 8, 2008
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    Beautiful on the prompt dear... Good luck in the contest!


  • MD Masroor
    November 8, 2008

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    Wow. Well written with great imagery and structure. You're take on the picture prompt was well planned out. Keep it up and good luck in the contest!

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