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Enter the last season

Nude trees drop dead leaves
October bids farewell with ease.
Very crisp, Will O' the wisp
Errant wind has a whistling lisp.
Mighty rays of sunnier days
Bid adieu  in winter's gaze
Encroaching chill of December's will
Reminding thoughts of icy thrill

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  • Barbara gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Nice poem... although, November ends with an "R" and you have it as a "B". I always reread before I judge, so I'll come back with the comment and see if it's changed.

    (Bid adieu in winter's gaze.... nice line.)


    • Lady-Pegasus
      November 11, 2008
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      DOH

      it was late is my excuse and I am sticking with it! All fixed now. Thank you for your comments and this wonderful contest!


  • Legend silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    Excellent little rhyming acrostic a pleasure to read good luck in the contest

  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008

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    Excellent

    So much bite to this, very well done. The "nude trees," the"errant wind," the "encroaching chill" there is so much depth in these alone. Fine job