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" Love Heard Me "

I kept still for a while

Felt a pleasant sensation

The indiscribable great harmony

The brightness of the sky

The melancholy of the moment

Spread throughout my body

I don't know what happened in my mind

Nor do I have anyway to describe it in words

It was a moment that defied all words

When i felt something inside

Something awake!

In a world that has now been born from my heart, mind and soul

Love has seen me awaken

Love has heard me speak




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  • nilav
    November 23, 2008
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    that is the feeling of love ...refreshing,filling and enchanting to go on without words...


  • sunoir
    November 12, 2008
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    deep to one's core wonderful write!


  • PureRomance
    November 9, 2008

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    This poem is absolutely beautiful and you did a fantastic job with the title. Thank you for this brilliant masterpiece. May God bless you always in everything you do and write and best of luck to you in the contest.