I kept still for a while
Felt a pleasant sensation
The indiscribable great harmony
The brightness of the sky
The melancholy of the moment
Spread throughout my body
I don't know what happened in my mind
Nor do I have anyway to describe it in words
It was a moment that defied all words
When i felt something inside
Something awake!
In a world that has now been born from my heart, mind and soul
Love has seen me awaken
Love has heard me speak
Author notes
LoveDeprived
A contest entry
- For only poets up for a challenge by PureRomance.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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that is the feeling of love ...refreshing,filling and enchanting to go on without words...
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deep to one's core wonderful write!


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This poem is absolutely beautiful and you did a fantastic job with the title. Thank you for this brilliant masterpiece. May God bless you always in everything you do and write and best of luck to you in the contest.



