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You and I

I told you to drop me a line
you made me the line

You said I held the chain to your heart
I ended on a chain at your feet

I bowed before your awesome beauty
you bent me to your whim

You said I swam in your deep end
I landed in the mucked shallows

I clothed you in my Love
you stripped me with your hate

You gave birth to my end
I died in your disgrace

Author notes

Picture prompt of:
http://th09.deviantart.com/fs18/300W/f/2007/174/6/b/the_fog_and_the_spider_by_crotalo.jpg/

ok so maybe not quite what you were looking for, but then i tend to be a bit of an unconventionalist

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Galaxy2
    November 8, 2008
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    'You gave birth to my end
    I died in your disgrace'
    Beautiful!
    Gal


  • Cannonsfire
    November 8, 2008
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    Interesting take on the picture, thank you for entering. C


    • Lady-Pegasus
      November 8, 2008
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      Thank you

      I guess my muse is more unconventional even than I! haha Especially being away for so long!