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DST , a difference

passing in a blink
expanding eternally
gets away from us

hour fast, hour slow
either way, time passes

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  • PrettyLilBullet
    November 20, 2008

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    That's really cool. It's short and sweet and has a topic that isn't what you would consider a typical poem topic. It was really good. Thank you for commenting my poem! ^_^