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Vanishing Moments

A child begging in the streets
too cold to do more than shiver
a hand outstretched in hope
you turn away unheeding
the chance to help is gone
the moment has vanished

  ~ ~ ~

garbage rotting on the land
forest robbed of it's elegance
earth fallen to destruction
you think how sad it is
but change not your ways
the moment has vanished

  ~ ~ ~

A simple request for equality
a vote that could change
a chance to make a difference
you say "Why bother?"
and do not even try
the moment has vanished

  ~ ~ ~

entire country ravished
starving and dying from disease
unclothed and uncared for
you shake your head in disbelief
but your wallet remains closed
the moment has vanished

  ~ ~ ~

religious fanaticism
replacing common decency
demeaning women and children
you shrug your shoulders
thinking what can one person do
the moment has vanished

  ~ ~ ~

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  • leander Moderators member
    January 2
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    This is a very good poem, radiating a strong message throughout the lines... well done!


  • Cat gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    this absolutely qualifies for the contest.
    i for one dislike author notes greatly- there was no need for them here
    as your words in the poem did for the poem what was intended- you showed
    a world changing and that the power to affect it positively is in our hands.

    nice.

    thanks so much..

    m


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    no need for your author notes...
    you get your message through loud and clear.
    it is a different take on the prompt
    it was enjoyable and reminded me to be greatful and to make an opportunity available.
    thank you for this entry