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The Naked Truth

Stripped by stupidity
Unclothed by uncaring
Denuded by denial
Brought bare by bias
Disrobed by destruction
Exposed by entropy
Fleeced by fanaticism
Shorn by should-have-done's
Curtailed by cynicism
Divested by dejection
Indigent by indifference

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  • leander Moderators member
    December 30, 2008

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    I definately love the alliteration you have used here - it's one of the most beautiful poetic devices in poetry.

    Thank you for this entry!
    Leander


  • nevadapoet
    November 11, 2008
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    Very powerful language, an excellent take on the prompt. Very very strong. Thanks for the entry.


  • Galaxy2
    November 8, 2008
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    You beautifully explored the words....