She's the Queen of her castle
She makes her own perfume.
Yes, the walls all have holes
but she stays well groomed.
In her dance is her liberty.
And in her day resides her night.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http//zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Angel-69859594
I chose option #1
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Anyone? by chilali.
655 points, ended November 10, 2008, 18 entries
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A very great short write. I love the last night a lot. Very, very deep. Your take on the picture was very interesting and I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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Please mention the option you have chosen as well as the picture credit in your Author Notes. Thank you.
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I also agree, the last line is very profound....wonderful poem
Good luck in the contest
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Beautiful poem, Good luck in the contest
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And in her day resides her night.
A very profound sentence -
I think you have a very nice poem here. I like your simple, yet lovely interpretation of the image and that I knew right away which one you were writing about.
(Don't forget to add the picture credit to you author notes! ^_-)
I thought the ending was the strongest part of the piece - "In her dance is her liberty". Very nice.
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