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Faithless

 

 

I'm so tired of repeating the things I said

Why can't you just listen to me instead

Just forget that I ever said anything

My one request is that you stop thinking

 

 

Everything's backwards

Everything's crazy

We're all slackers

We're all lazy

And I can't take it anymore

 

 

So just forget it

That's what you do

You never let it

Sink into you

Don't bother listening

'Cause I can tell

That you're pretending

It's in your yell

I know that you don't care

 

 

You think I can't be trusted or that I lied

Well I'm sick of hearing your faithless cries

I won't beg for forgiveness....that's not my place

It's me that should be questioning your faith

 

 

Everyone's heartless

All are misguided

We're all faithless

All two sided

And I can't take it anymore

 

 

Forget about me

I do not exist

You don't believe

That I will be missed

 

 

Empty

Crazy

Hopeless

Faithless

Fools

Author notes

**Special thanks to Guenter Rossenbach for the photo & to Kat for the lovely background**

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  • Ange de nuite
    November 4
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    Loved the rhythm of it especially the chorus parts, we've all felt like this at times. Keep it up


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    December 19, 2008

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    Wow

    Very truly amazing write i love it i love the whole thing nothing to complain about great job always write with the heart and soul if you do that all your stuff will be amazing keep it up keep it going stay true stay sic and peace out


  • fairytalelovestory
    December 19, 2008
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    this is simply amazing


  • Truthful Sinner
    December 11, 2008
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    Nice

    I enjoyed this particular piece of work more then the last one I commented on because it is true.

  • Eusebius
    December 10, 2008
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    Man, this is a great and wonderful lyric! I loved it a ton and a half! very fine stuff indeed....


  • Cannonsfire
    December 7, 2008

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    You write very good lyrics, they make me want to hum a tune for them as the cadence of them lends itself to music. Well done here C


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    AMAZING background

    These lyrics were fantastic, very powerful


  • edens-envy
    December 4, 2008

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    I feel like I can hear Avril Lavigne or Blue October wailing this song. I could totally hear it my head!

    You have a storng voice in all of your pieces.


  • thepoetssoul
    December 3, 2008

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    These are strait to the point lyricsVery thought provoking and imaginitive.Your pen did some exellent dancing across the screen.It would be nice to have the chords so I could play it
    Splendidly done indeed,thanks for sharing your song with us all.

    Tony


  • brokenxxangel
    November 11, 2008

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    Beautiful! The music in the lyrics flows easily and smoothly. I love the lyrics and the song is touching and sad.


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    wow

    this sounds like a song that you can sing to people i love it keep it coming


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    thumbs up

    the music flows through your words love it


  • kyle052411
    November 9, 2008
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    Excellent! I've been wanting to attempt writing a song, but I'm not sure how haha. Keep it up!


  • panthericpathwalker
    November 9, 2008
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    I think you are wonderful! Keep it up, I want more to read. =) Blessings.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Excellent

    Great song...I like the entire piece, but the second verse is my favorite, perhaps because I've gone through that type of turmoil...dunno. Good job,

    Vito


  • offlimits
    November 9, 2008

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    lovely hunny its beautiful and full of pain
    im just uploading a new one about dieing of a broken heart if yu wanna take a look lol one day...
    seems it hard this song and that it was about someone that was close to your heart and it is amazing i loved it i really did.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Lovely, well-crafted, would also like to hear it set to music! But perhaps the music is best coming in our heads as we read -- sometimes it works that way... thank you for sharing.

  • Wayward Seraph
    November 8, 2008
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    Another very talented write... so when you going to start loading music onto itunes??


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    I can really hear music behind this...do you write music to your lyrics? 'Cause by now you must a couple of albums going!

  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008

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    Moving

    Very telling, "We're all faithless"
    "All two sided," deep stuff ... and if possible, three and four sided. Well done.
    Keep writing

  • Fiend
    November 8, 2008

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    Vivid

    You captured in a matter of lines the contempt and disassociation in every argument I've ever been in. Such an illusion of control was portrayed, and yet still you left your sense of vulnerability included. An emotion slide towards the abyss of being lonely. Great piece!!!


  • FaerieNWonderland
    November 8, 2008
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    loved the song i felt as if i could hear it


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    I really like this I would love to hear it sung, the rhythm is great it has a very melancholy feel to it, i love the line everyones heartless allare misguided we're all faithless all two sided, it really sing itself in my head


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 8, 2008

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    This is a very cool song,
    i much enjoyed it, it'll probably sound better if it was sung though, lol, and i cant sing.
    Well done on this and thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment.

    All the best to you

    Ken


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    What a wonderful piece of writing, I could imagine this as a recorded song. Well done. Best to you


  • bigperm
    November 8, 2008

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    such a solid piece

    I love the way you've added guiding/helpful inserts.ie (Repeat Chorus 2x), that really helps to invision the work with the same level of passion that you have obviously poured into it. You have a great talent


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    I'm so tired of repeating the things I said
    Why can't you just listen to me instead
    Just forget that I ever said anything
    My one request is that you stop thinking

    these lines are so powerful! you conveyed the feeling of being redundant and tired of getting the run around. I wish I could hear the song

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