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Behind my mind's eye

I closed my eyes , weary of the world
I saw the world within my mind
I heard the cries of the despair
Despair we wrought upon out selves and each other.

I closed my eyes, fearful of the dark
I saw the light within mans heart
Small and weak and heard it say
"I am Hope and I do not want to die"

I closed my eyes, pretending superiority
I saw my failings full to bare
I heard the laughter of others that know
My inner child was just insecure

I closed my eyes, unsure of everything
I saw the possiblilites that can be
I heard a single sound escaping
A whisper that said Yes!

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Lady-Pegasus option #2.) Close your eyes, listen, write about what you hear.

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  • Hell In Harmony
    November 18, 2008

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    This is interesting.
    kept me reading
    and wanting more


    i wish it hadnt ended
    quite so soon

  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008
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    Enlightening/ Amazing

    A profound write, soulful content,Loved the second stanza, Hope should always remain.