Lying next to your body
A pool of blood and a rose
Note in hand
This rose wasnt made for love.
Author notes
It's not very good, I appologive. :S
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #3 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sad...
The flow is a bit off, but I can definately envision what you are saying.
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It's not great but the imagery is their, one you could go back to and add lines, darkness..., and create perhaps a masterpiece, a poem that's dying to be given new life.
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Not very good? Hmm! I liked it actually. I can just imagine the whole thing. Really great imagery and very simple as well. Simplicity is beauty
Thank you for your entry and good luck! 
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It really paints a vivid picture of the prompted words...good luck in the contest lol
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It's great!! Such a sad take on the prompt... stark in it's imagery.. touches the heart! Well done!
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I think this is great, such a sad interpretation of the prompt. Well done, best to you in the contest
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Not good you say? you have any idea how deep that is? The imagery? the meaning? i think it's beyond spectacular! good luck in the contest!
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