By this time tomorrow
she'll have my head.
The rose I gave her
was not her favorite color.
Thrown overboard.
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #3 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 7 entries
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The queen of hearts?
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Hehehe. I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. Nicely done. Thanks for your entry and good luck
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Im wondering about the last line.
If I knew the song maybe?
okay, I would never evry throw anyone out if my roses werent the right color.
I would pout and cry and whine for days. Maybe get pissy.
Wish you the bst,
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wow, short, and deep, and this can be depicted in more than as many ways possible. this is what i like about poems like these, since they carry endless meanings. keep it up! good luck int he contest!
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LOL.. uhoh.. he's in such trouble!!!
Cool take!
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Please complete your entry Time is up and I need to judge. Thank you.
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