Prove your love to me
honor and support me
open your heart
make me believe
that you want me to stay
Author notes
21 Words
Prompt: Roses are not made for love (This is from one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard. Xandria - Like A Rose On The Grave Of Love)
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #3 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your thoughts and comments on my write. However, please do not add my user name to your comments. I appreciate it!
Comments
1 - 11 of 11
-
Great poem. Truth within love, honesty and care are really needed.
-
I like this very much
it is direct and obliging
it shows the true nature of your heart
whispers your fondest hopes
good luck in the contest
-
Love this hon you did a great job on this! Good luck in the contest
-
Wonderfully penned
My sweet sweet brother,
You have penned here a most wonderful write.It touches on the borderline of Master/slave,You being Master.
I have enjoyed reading you and I would do anything to make you want to stay.
much love and happiness to you.
~Angel~
-
A great, great write! This has got such a beautiful tone and flow! Thank you for your entry and good luck
-
hard core?
okay, that makes sense.
I think this poem is outstanding, and I wish you all the best.
jin -
Ouch, that's bordering on hard-core hahahaha great write, good luck in the contest lol
-
So beautiful, This has such a loving feel to it even in its sadness. Best to you in the contest
-
Yes! Roses are nice and all... but love must be earnt through trust, honor and support! Nicely done bro!
-
This was good, it was deep.
Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest. =]
Vampy -
Wow. Deep, strong, and somehow, it reflects the prompt. A great poem from a great poet! Keep it up!
Adding your comment:
1 - 11 of 11
