Between living life,
planning death,
haven't found any time.
Broken petals
underneath feet,
I don't miss you at all.
Author notes
Roses are not made for love (This is from one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard. Xandria - Like A Rose On The Grave Of Love) And I think the writes in this contest are going to be soooo interesting! Hehe
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #3 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yes, but what do you think?
Comments
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Oh wow.. this was nicee. The trophy was well deserved. Great write
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Well I am not too late to congratulate you for your efforts
well deserved Jinny
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I think this is rather stark, which works for a breif piece. This subject "Destiny" is so broad, but you have refined it so well, where we end up is where we are, and simple truth then, becomes profound, "I don't miss you at all." (did you ever) Enjoyed this write. Geo
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Great entry! A very nice take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck
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Wow. deep, and dark, and serene at the same time. an amazing flow here, which makes this poem just worth it. good luck in the contest!
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Sigh.. time is so fleeting isn't it sis!
I think we often grind away our common sense out of desperation!
Fantastic take!
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I like this alot. I especially enjoyed the last couplet. I like the whole glass bit. Nicely done on this, good luck in the contest =]
Vampy -
Please complete your entry Time is up and I need to judge. Thank you.
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