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Another Monday 2 Remember

We are rocking along to our favorite jams
I'm dancing
your grouving
to the amazing beats

I smile at you
and you look at me
its warms my cheeks
then you smile

it was fun while it lasted
but I have to go home
I brushed my hand against your cheek
it felt like sand paper

I smile again
and wave good bye
thinking to myself
'I'll kiss him next time'

Author notes

He and I r getting closer....it scares me...but I'll get over that ^_^
11/08/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 8, 2008

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    this is good my friend, i mean that you did a great job on this poem, keep it flowing, i am happy for you


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    LOL! This is so cute!
    I know how you feel. It's quite complicated
    when you want to make the first move and
    can't bring yourself to do it because of fear.
    I am sure that in time it will happen for you.
    You'll know when the time is right and it will
    be such a beautiful moment for the both of
    you. Don't rush it and just enjoy every minute
    that you are both together. I hope that you
    both find yourselves getting closer with every
    passing day! Take care and good luck to you
    in your new relationship sweetie!




    Jeremy0826