Contemplating.......
becoming captured by you gently, softly
Your thoughts surrounding me
like feathers floating
Lifted by your warm breath
feeling like falling, releasing
Transformed into updrafts, transcending
soaring like seagulls laughing at ripples
Still contemplating, forever reflecting
light rays penetrating into your soul
Like iridescent moon beams
leading me off into dreams, imagination
Left wandering off endlessly
wrapped together
Only the two of us
contemplating as one
Author notes
Crediting artist....Prompt: the above picture http://paperplease.deviantart.com/art/End-Of-The-Road-101072311
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #7 by AutumnGypsy.
900 points, ended November 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a lovely piece, packed wth verbs to be sure. I enjoyed this, Best to you in the contest
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Lovely! You've taken what most would see as a dark prompt and given it a very uplifting take. Nicely done John!
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