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I made you feel something, didn't I?
I found out your weakness and you were scared I'd use it to my advantage...
To manipulate you like you've done me,
To control you with my newly found power.
I only wanted you to love me the way I do you,
but that never could be the case could it?

I didn't even know I had you.
Funny isn't it?
How you never realize what you have till it's gone.
I never knew you "loved" me till it was to late.
Hell, by then you already hit the road.

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Just a little insperation...it's gonna be turned into a poem.

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  • The.Stars.Go.Blue
    November 8, 2008

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    First line = inspiring. I think I want to go write now...
    but yeah, I look forward to reading this when it's finished if it's already this awesome. <3333


  • HisLove
    November 7, 2008

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    Nice.

    This reminds me of me and my ex. It onlytook me to grow a few years older and wiser to realize how much i could manipulate his weak and feeble mind if i wanted but it's not worth it because I am happy now. I like this inspiration. Very good.