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Shattered moments

The sun perched high in the sky,
a moment wrapped in perfection
That magnificent smile graces you,
as you lavish me with affection

The snow gracefully falling,
you make an angel in the snow
That sweet little halo shimmers,
as my feelings for you grow

You slowly walk down that aisle,
beautifully clad only in white
Not a dry eye for those looking on,
to that amazing heavenly sight

Three years now gone and how can it be,
that nothing has changed at all
I walk through that door back to your arms,
and instantly I once again fall

Was it all a dream or mistaken reality,
perhaps it was all a facade and untrue
Nothing remains now but a vision of the past,
trapped in these shattered moments with you

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Welcome-To-Hell Option 3 Shattered Moments

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  • kitsmith
    November 15, 2008

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    nice.. i was falling in love with the piece forgetting the title, and then you slap us all in the face with it in the last stanza. thanks for entering.


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    November 8, 2008
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    NICE !

    Good Luck In the contest