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In My Own World

Submerged.
In my own world,
The surroundings don't matter.
There are no walls,
No limits,
It's not a competition.
I have peace of mind.
Just me and who I am,
No judgments,
No fear.
Only dreams and possibilities.

Mascha Muenzesheimer




A contest entry

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  • Jokerman
    November 20, 2008

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    LOVE THAT LITTLE COUPLET IT'S NOT A COMPETITION IHAVE PEACE OF MIND.
    PUTS EVERYTHING INTO PERSPECTVE.THIS POEM IS FULL OF CALM.GOOD WRITING.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    This is a really good and well thought out piece, well done. Best to you in the contest


  • LionessK silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    I like your take on the picture prompt.. and the message/meaning of your words. Very nicely put together and written out. Good luck in the contest.
    I hope you will continue to write and share your words here with us all.
    Enjoy the site.


    • MaschaKMuenzesheimer
      November 10, 2008
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      thanks!!!!

      thanks for your comment it always makes me feel great when i get feedback or when someone like my poetry. i gave you five stars for your comment but right now its only showing at 2 i hope that changes.