Axed echo

we cut a tree trunk
and echo causes heat wave

The Earth vanishes

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The Butterfly Effect by SeptemberFaith. 1400 points, ended December 22, 2008, 17 entries
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Tqop
June 16
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Wow!
Yes. It's sad.
SeptemberFaith
December 15, 2008

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I'd hate to see the earth vanish at the heat caused by the cutting of a tree, however, this is the exact point.. cause and effect.

Nicely done!
Criss
- Manoj Sanyal
  December 16, 2008
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  Thanks for appreciation.
  Have a nice day.
  best wishes,
Heath Thompson
November 11, 2008
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Seems very Zen-influenced! Good luck with the contest.
crimsondew
November 8, 2008
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A thinker sort of haiku here...good one..