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Forced Fertility

 

 

 

 

 

 

For love of words,

that must be heard
I sing my song to thee
Forced obliteration
Oh blind one,

you must see

Dark shades can filter

the pouring sun
Clouded- within

blocked views
So cover your eyes,

the wadding man
These rhymes

are just for you

Admiration is...

a guilded bird
Never getting

off the ground
Its wings of gold,

forever hold
Fleeting wisdoms

can be found

A silent verse,

the rhyming curse
Does haunt your view today
Twas made from love,

and muse above

Go ahead,

send a wad my way

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

rhythm and talent rhyme
just for you
fuck me

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  • JinSays gold member
    February 6

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    Wow.
    The meaning only reveals itself after you read it and then read it again. All I can do is shake my head.
    jin


  • sheltered
    November 26, 2008
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    forced fertility but not rhyme
    nicely spun


  • notorious
    November 26, 2008
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    Speechless.as.well.


  • sheltered
    November 9, 2008
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    i'm so far wordless


  • masterblaster gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    Hi, a lovely poem, it wll go over the heads of a few but many wil see the meaning, great, Di


  • Randomly Beautiful
    November 8, 2008
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    Best rhyme I've read on the site.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 7, 2008
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