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"Speaking of _you"


every day…

I tie a string
around my finger

not because --

I am forgetful
of something very important
to me

it’s only to remind me,
how…     
                you keep me;

wrapped around, 
your 
        little finger.



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prompt;"Speaking of......."

whimsical thoughts

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 11, 2008
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    Sweet.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is so sweet. Nicely done! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    very clever and creative
    God bless you my friend...