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Outbreak

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I'm a silly little girl
In a silly little world
Not much to see
But lets take it for a whirl

He's a silly little boy
Who I can't avoid
So much to see
So Lets take that whirl

This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
Everybody Scream
This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
This is the time
Now... SCREAM

Just when
You think You've got the life
The whole thing is split with a Knife
So spell it, Hey
So spell it, Hey
Hey, hey

This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
Everybody scream
This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
This is the time
So SCREAM

Up, down,
Turn around,
Think about it now
Yeah
This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
Everybody scream
This is an OUTBREAK
Outbreak
This is the time to say
"Hey"

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  • Mr.Hairbrush
    November 7, 2008

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    Oh I like it alot. It's like upbeat, and cool. Haha You should totally keep writing. You're very good