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seasons reflect moods
mixing colours and feelings
one lifetime for all
mixing colours and feelings
one lifetime for all
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Author notes
picture credit:- http:// cykoe.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-3-Human-Nature-76667338
Haiku
Mariana
13)"The sun shines not on us, but in us. The rivers flow not past, but through us, thrilling, tingling, vibrating every fiber and cell of the substance of our bodies, making them glide and sing." John Muir
Source: The Gospel of Thomas
A contest entry
- Haiku by Kathraina.
900 points, ended January 5, 42 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a wonderful piece of poetry which glances out at the world with eyes of compassion and light's wispy sighs; intermingled with hope's smiles and love's collisions in heart and soul. every branch transforms into wise worldy wordy ways and the hand of god strokes mother nature's beauty, she sighs humanity across an expanse of individuality and the birth of man - the homeland.
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Awesome Sis...
You certainly know your way around a ku...
Wonderfully & masterfully done!!!
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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This is a sweet and thoughtful haiku. The picture works real well with it too.
Thank you for your entry.
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nice write and great picture as well . . congrats on the gold !!
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this deserved to win
bravo -
Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!!!
Beautiful work, Poet!!
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I hope nobody plucks a leave! that'd hurt...LoLz
Great job on this piece. The imagery is superb, and I absolutely love the idea of moods and seasons reflecting eachother.
♥ Kathraina -
Good Job Maggie
Short but very good
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It is true that seasons reflect moods. I find myself in better spirits when autumn comes. The changing leaves with all of their colours are a testament to the beauty of the season. I enjoyed this haiku. There's much depth to be found here.
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thumbs up
great picture haiku fits nicley
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Thank you for your Haiku:
seasons reflect moods
mixing colours and feelings
one lifetime for all
Beautifully said. It has a deep meaning.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
(I think you are Mariana, but you have written Marian in the author's notes )
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Yes..this is so true..and very curious thought is reflecting from the depth of the words showing the life and its changes around the seasons of our own truths...
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They sure do. This relects natures cycle well. Such expression for such a short piece of poetics.
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So few words, so much said. You did really great with this!
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"One lifetime for all" I love the type of last lines that stick with you. And the picture is completely awesome.
Cheers,
Tala
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This is a beautiful Haiku! You did a nice job, and that picture is so awesome! I wish you all the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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