She's got a smile that sets me free
Reminds me of the bluest skies
She lifts me up into the brightest blue sky
Now and then I see her smiling face
She fills me with that special grace
And if I'd frown for too long
I'd probably break down and die
Sweet child o' mine
Sweet daughter of mine
She's got eyes of the shiniest blue seas
I know it's not going to be the same
Sweetest daughter
I hate to look and see her pain
Her hair smells sweet to me her cute little face
I protect her from the darkest skies
And pray for the summer
My sweet child who keeps me sane
I wipe the tears from her eye
Sweet child o' mine
Sweet daughter of mine
Oh how I love her so
I want to protect her now
Watch her grow
Sweet daughter o' mine
Author notes
3. Sweet Child 'o Mine by Guns 'n Roses
A contest entry
- SUPER AWESOME MUSIC OPTIONS! :-) by cbsbecm88.
600 points, ended November 8, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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great song choice and great right! i really enjoyed reading this! it was so beautiful! my only comlaint is that is sounds a little too much like the song itself but other than that great job and thank you!
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