I want 2 die
I want 2 leave
This world of pain behind me
To once again be free from pain
Is nothing but a dream.
I am unloved
I am unwanted
To once again be free from pain
Is nothing but a dream
I want to sit
I want to cry
want to end this ugly life
No reason to live
No reason to care
I will just sit and stare
I let it out
I sit and cry
Why make me live this horrid lie?
I have nothing left
Noone to care
I see the scissors sitting there
Ready to use
Ready to cut
I pick them up
Thinking this is it just one cut.
I hold them to my wrist
Shaking with fear
Noone will shed a tear.
I take a breath
My tears getting worse
Noone to hear
Noone to stop me
Noone to hug or kiss me
I hold the scissors
One last breath
This is it
Sat here on my bed
I cut my wrist slowly and Steady
Feeling the pain shoot up my body
Its over now
Time to wait
For the blood to come pouring out
There it is in streams of ribbon
I feel my self going
I feel the end
No more life of pain
A few minuets later my mum gets in
She calls my name
There`s no reply
I wonder why
This was the day i died
This was the day i passed to the other side.
Through the Window all i see
Is happy people
Is it all a dream?
I`ll never know
I`ll never care
As im floating through the air
The blood you see all on the floor
And that poor dead girl
Thats it i have done it
Im free from the pain
Im free from this life
To start again
I hope there happy!
The people who pushed me to this
Cause this will be my last wish
I wish for all the people like me
To be saved befor they join me
Up here in the sky
Where all the angels cry.
Author notes
Another one i wrote when i was cornicly depressed. my Friend acshaly used this as a song for his band.
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Very emotional and touching piece. Wonderfully worded and has a great flow. Thank you for sharing.
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This write has so much emotion and feeling thanks for entering this write
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Amazing, this is a very touchig piece, I really enjoyed reading this, good luck in the contest!
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I'm speechless. What can I say? One AMAZING POEM! I've felt that way a couple of times, it's not nice! Keep it up, your poems really do get to my emotions. I also agree with kyle052411 when he said= "It was almost as if I was watching a movie".
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I, too, can relate to this. There have been times when I have felt that no one loved me, or would miss me if I were no longer here. I found myself engulfed by this poem. It was almost as if I was watching a movie. Nice job! I like it a lot!
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Wow I started crying a bit. I can totally relate. It's very emotional, I know how it feels, the hate the pain, wanting to die. Keep writing.
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