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Tears of Red

Breaking me from the inside out
Destroying me from the outside in
Does it make you happy to see the scars
The bruises that won't seem to fade
Too see tears of fear stinging my skin
Or is it just another game to you
Another toy for you to play with
Throw me against the wall I scream
Crush me with your hugs I'm silent
Showering me with dozens of roses
With a huge smile on your face
Harshly whispering "stop crying"
Other couples stare in awe

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  • kitsmith
    November 11, 2008
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    Interesting. Please follow all rules.. perhaps I did not set them up right... SN and option in AN, please. Thank you!

    Now, for the poem... It's very interesting... it's like... confusion and pain and then love or at least what seems like love.. and other couples watching in awe.. not horror... definitely interesting. Thanks for entering.