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Infalliable

by hatchet,
knife, and lengths of rope, I
have acquired raw materials.

it took so many nights of work to
transform my exquisite
new corpses.

finally
their alchemical shift
into lovely things is completed.

each toothy treasure collected one
after another, all
infallibly.

lovingly
stacked, so neatly arranged,
my many mandibled mementos.

nearby, a
careful concoction of
coccyx and vertebrae is setting.

well envisioned but yet unfashioned,
soon to be my greatest
masterpiece.

ribcages
lie scattered awaiting
their chimerical transmutation

and I owe this creative bliss to
infallibility,
certainly!

Author notes

This is option six. My username is intoothandclaw. Obviously murder is bad and illegal and wrong. That's why you shouldn't do it unless guaranteed of infallibility. (j/k!)

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  • Hell In Harmony
    November 18, 2008
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    Niiiiiice
    lol. well I guess we
    all have a little bit of this
    left in us