Ascending the stairs of loneliness,
not knowing to where.
Chilled breath of love's passing
upon a heart broken
dampening a soul.
Once for two, now echoing
silent sonnet within
the forest of lost dreams.
Summers passions
fading into Autumns remembrance
Author notes
Credit Artist: http://ladydarkraven.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-Requiem-102334318
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by kiwigirljacks.
625 points, ended November 9, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such despair in this write.. yet written delicately and it just floats melancholic across the page.
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Thank you for the reading and commenting......
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excellent~
This is beautiful
Penned excellent but sad yet too
Love the poem and it goes perfect with the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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I thank you so much for the reading and commenting an an old man's ramblings....
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Very Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a great piece you have penned taking on more than one meaning that is for sure...Your vocabulary paints such a vivid image and even without the picture leads the reader right you wanted to take them here...fading Autumn and fading love both at the same time!!! Thanks for sharing your gift with us here
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I thank you so much for your time invested in reading and commenting on these rambling words. I glad you enjoyed.
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