In the steps of Autumn
beauty captured a sigh
as lips touched colors.
unknown destination
cradle silent movements
dressed for weddings of
Fairy Tales.
Surrounded by softness
colored by love, waiting
for December, as dreams
dance in Falls light...
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outstanding
very beautiful, the imagery is first rate, the story is simply beautiful.
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this is a really lovly poem it captured my heart
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And such softness in this write! Ahh to have the Fiary Tale... just lovely!
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this is truly beautiful!!! You gave such excellent details and descriptions you truly portrayed this piece well!!!!
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Oh, what creative form and flow...such soft gemtle flow with beautiful metaphor and imagery...I love the ending and the way your words seem to dance across the winds of Fall...well done!
mystic
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... as dreams dance in fall lights ....
This is beautiful. I love Autumn and the colors that appear. I wish it could be autumn all year long. Here in CA we hardly see a single season, that I sometimes I wish I lived in a place where I could experience all 4 at different times
You're words are like an angels song.
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I live in the Midwest, so I see all the seasons, and at first it's beautiful, but trust me.. After a year with winter. You just wish you could skip that season.. Frost bite sucks! lol.
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Okay.. I'll trade you lives for a week. You can deal with California and the crazy its raining in the morning and 90 degrees in the afternoon...
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Lol, I have family that lives in California, so I'm a bit used to it. and I was born and raised in Texas so. Lol. I'm a bit used to heat
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Wo0t!!! I know why you wait for December and I am soooo happy for you 
C
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