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a View In the Night

The lady left her party.
Taking time,  just to think.
Breathing in the moment.
Before you all awaits.
To rule was your fate.

This has been your home.
From the garden to the safety of the trees.
Grace you were granted
Love is in your heart.
To rule was your fate

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    To be granted grace and love is a wonderful thing indeed. Nicely done


  • Birdie
    November 7, 2008
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    I like this

    This reminds me a lot of my friends. It was beautifully writen.
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