The sight i see in my mind
A pack of wolfs all in line
Wolvebanes winter attacks thire furr
spirits low and hard 2 see
through the storm that looks like sea
The dragga domminunt and proud
Leads his pack through ice and snow
To find a place of warmth and need
Not far a cave in the east
His partner the drappa pregnaunt with pups
Scared she will lsoe them in wolvebanes attack
Fear and despies fills her heart
Why must the evil one push them so far!
The ground ahead so light and pure
Yet something hung over them all
A fear a curse, a Shadow in light
A darkness arises and fills them with might
The skila a weekling Amoung the pack
Draws strength from the darkness and never looks back
The futuer and saftey he seeks
Will soon be rewarded with warmth and with meat.
Author notes
Wolves bassed on the Book The Sight
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Comments
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i love how it follows a story,
and it's gives the animals a heart,
it parallels life in so many ways,
dee -
wow i must say that you have captured this brilliantly and i loved reading every word of this poem. like i said i absolutely love wolves and thought that book was just amazing...good luck.
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This was one of my favorite parts: "The skila a weekling Amoung the pack, Draws strength from the darkness and never looks back". The reason I liked it so much was because it portrays a message that no matter how inferior one feels it is possible to rise above the rest and become superior with effort.
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