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pure love

Your eyes,
glisten in the light,
and show your love for me.

 

Your arms,

hold me so tight,

almost as if we were one.

 

Your smile,

lightens up my day,

showing you can crack a joke.

 

Your words,

soft like that of feathers,

and full of life with every breath.

 

Your smell,

engulfs my body, soul, and

that which could replace one thousand roses.

 

Your humor,

that makes me laugh so hard,

leaving me in a daze of how did I ever get you.

 

My luck,

to get the one of the good guys,

the one with many different qualities I love.

 

You,

the one I love,

the one I need.

 

 

Author notes

I know I haven't written anything in a while. But I have more inspiration now more than ever, I just have to write. Sadly I have yet to have enough time to sit and let my mind organize it all so this is just some of what is to come. And in case you were wondering this is about my boyfriend that I am crazy about.

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Comments

  • *Shuts the green eyed monster in his cage*

    Luck has nothing to do with it babes x You deserve every happiness. I am soooo happy you have found someone that makes you feel this way. Just remember that I'm always lurking in the shadows somewhere near xx

  • Astaraelneth
    November 9, 2008
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    Very lovely poem, very descriptive and vivid, paints a pretty picture!


  • Darkmoon
    November 8, 2008

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    this remindes me soo much of my boyfriend! i started getting goose bumps when i read this! i love it!! keep writing!!
    ~Edna~