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Ancient Travelers

Missing image
soft, my lover calls
I wear his passion like pearls
reflecting moonlight

Cassiopeia
bound by her heavenly crown
spanning continents

Ancient Travelers
distance bridged by points of light
star-stung connections

how close we are now
each gazing at the same star
unbroken passion



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revison and rewrites of several different tanks, my first entry wtih this group

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    how close we are now
    each gazing at the same star
    unbroken passion

    I loved that one Excellent stanza


    • Draig aine gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      again my humble thanks

      it seems to flow when I am farthest away from him, I need to change the photo to the one he sent me from Nepal today, he wrote when he reached the summit he planted the wind horse and sent his love across the continents, anyway thanks


  • darell
    December 4, 2008

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    Wow!

    This was good. Amazing emotion.
    Passionate and so romantic.
    You did a wonderful job my dear