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lingering

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There's music in the sighing of a leaf
as it falls
by Autumn's poetic grace

and she'll feel her emotions,
the outbursts of her soul

when words disappear
and her song begins
with unsuspected eloquence
and a secret art

she breathes

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Credit Artist: http://ladydarkraven.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-Requiem-102334318

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Just reading again... sigh... gave me goosebumps again! You so deserve the Gold for this hun!



  • Rclane gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Amazing imagery here and so worth its Gold. Congrats to your penmanship and the mind to inspire the thought...


  • stylization
    November 9, 2008

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    This is stunning. It's simply amazing. It deserved the gold one hundred percent. I love the beautiful imagery here.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful. your words brought this picture to life. absolutely wonderful job.

    good luck
    kat


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    Just beautiful.. the mixing of music and poetry work wonderfully here. Gave me a big sigh...

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