I see him printed on the page or projected on the screen.
Perfectly within reach, yet impossible to touch.
I can't help but cry internally at how perfect he is, and how there isn't anyone like him here.
But he's not real.
Then I can't help but feel foolish for loving someone who doesn't exsist,
but I figure I'm not the first to love fiction like it were your only hope of reality.
He sits with his knees drawn up and a cup of sugar with some coffee to moisten it.
Those pictures of Light and he, and although I get the "full effect" it still burns my soul
like a tiny ciggarette hole t in cheap motel sheets.
Author notes
Prompt 19; Dirty Feet Remind Me Of You.
And if you haven't guessed, this is L/Ryuuzaki/Ryuuga/Lawlet/David/Coil/ and whatever other ailiouses he had. (Death Note)... sorry! That's just the prompt talking.
See ya later Space Cowboy...
A contest entry
- PROMPTS VIII - Round 1 of 2 - by Bear - by Arkbear.
400 points, ended November 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cool. I like this. I'm not quite sure who you're talking about but it's a great poem.
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That's the beauty of a book or cinema idol though, as they can never let you down either...!
imagine if you could touch them... maybe in a 1,000 years, sensoround will be here...
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I read it... and don't understand a thing you said
Darn generation gaps... 
that said, I did like the imagery you used...
Ken
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Unique write..from a person from the street's perspective looking on...
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Hello
Very nice write....I just can't score it, as you have gone to 125 words..>>> http://javascript.internet.com/forms/word-count.html
Please join me again for the next PROMPT Contest after Round 2 closes!
God bless you and thank you for entering,
Bear ~
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Good job
oooh, very pretty I like it alot, good luck! paints a pretty, unreal picture in my head... -
This is supposed to be 60 words or less.
It seems you get to the actual images towards the end of this poem. I like the picture you draw.
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This is very unique and cool and I enjoyed reading it emmensely.
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