My lovely lamb
Bella
You are the most radiant human being I ever met in my life of darkness
You say I have a soul
I don't
Because my soul went into you
I was searching for my soul for years
It appears to be returning back to me
You always surprise me
No matter if I can read your mind or not
I love your sparking brown eyes when the moon or sun sets upon them
Your hair, silky and smooth at my stone cold fingertips
Your warm skin I want to suck up so much because you feel so good
Your scent is the best flower I ever smelt
I want you more than life itself
I don't want your soul to go
I don't want your living beauty to vanish
I love you for you, Bella
I would never change you
I play your lullaby every time I'm away from you for more than a second
I love your soft warm lips against mine as we kiss
I love you for who you are
I want you for who you are
Isabella Swan,
I will love you until time stays still with only us in it...
Author notes
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OPTION 2) Write a poem from a character's point of view. It's Edward saying his wedding vows to Bella.
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Comments
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Touching
I can see Edwars saying these such words to the love of his existence! Good job capturing his tender loving care for Bella!
Great job and good luck in the contest!
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wow that was so sweet but suggestion you might want to darken the text i can barely read it i had to highlight it just a suggestion
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thank you
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This is a great write depicting Edward's feelings for Bella. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest
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Great
Passionate. You write from the heart.
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Awe, I must say I really did love how this seemed to catch Edward very well. I really enjoyed this pleasant take on I'm guessing option 1 This is really well done. I'm not exactly sure If I like the style however it was a little hard to read for me. That's just my personal opion though and take it for what you will.
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Nice.
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i've read this before. its also entered in my other contest.
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love it!!!!
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correction: Bella Swan in the book has chocolate brown eyes, but in the movie, kristen stewart has green eyes. Great poem though! good luck!
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never mind...
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what book says see haves brown eyes?
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Breaking Dawn. at least that the one I noticed it saying her eye color. because when she had to wear contacts because her eyes were red. and alice said it wouldnt get them back to chocolate brown color it would just make them muddy color. and also Reneesme had the exact same color as bella and she had chocolate brown.
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She does have brown eyes....but in the movie her eyes are not green. She wore contacts to make them brown.
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I'm aware of that now. I read the last book. Why say her eye color in the last book? I always thought it was green.
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sorry but option 8 in my contest is no longer avalible.
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sorry I might 7. Some how 8 was on my mind
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