Your voice
Made me smile
Your eyes
Made my heart stop
Your opinion
Made my style
And you made me feel on top
Your touch
Shocked me
Your hug
Made me warm
Your tickles
Made me crazy
And they always made me squirm
Your pace
Made me try
Your kiss
Made me turn red
Your yell
Made me cry
And now our love is dead
Your voice
A memory
Your eyes
Burn in my mind
Your opinion
Is not for me
And your love made me blind
Your touch
I can still feel
Your hug
Gives me chills
Your tickles
Were never real
And your love is what kills
Your pace
I remember
Your kiss
Stings my eyes
Your yell
Makes me shiver
And this is where our love dies.
A contest entry
- The most painful thing you have felt by G-y-p-o.
550 points, ended February 5, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - COME ON YOU KNOW YOU WANNA CLICK IT. by Xxnightmare21xx.
625 points, ended March 2, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a really good poem. I like the way the rhyme and rhythm make it stand out. The topic is sad and I know how you feel. I wish you luck.
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i think this might be the best poem i read today. Thank you for entering. i can relate to this poem as well. So Welcome to the finalists
Your Judge
kaycee
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I can relate to this and feel sad. Thanks for entering.
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sorry forgot the clappy thingies
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Awwe this is so sad but at the same time very beautiful, excellent flow!!
~tradgey
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