Scattered ever so gently,
floating through the air.
All around the room,
romantic enticement.
Assortment of colors,
red white and pink.
A beautiful arrangement,
sits ontop a table.
The soft velvet sheen,
beaming across the room.
Beauty within ever petal,
creating a serenity of bliss.
With each and every petal,
brings a new enchanting kiss.
The beauty holds promise,
of returning eternal love.
Sending hope to the lovers,
in even the darkest times.
And as the petals start to dry,
brings beauty of scent,
throughout the room.
Magic and beauty is held by,
the Velvet Rose Petals
Author notes
option 7
my user name is Velvet Rose Petals
A contest entry
- Options for those in search for something new by kitsmith.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
Comments
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Different
But in a good way. Another great piece.
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"The beauty holds promise,
of returning eternal love."
I really like this, but the only thing I would say is could you please change your font color to black? It really hurts my eyes. That's all.
Beautiful poem... love the imagery. I can almost smell the sweet and soft scent of the roses when I read it. I love how you mention that the aroma still lingers after the petals start to dry... such an optimistic view instead of what usually comes with wilting.
I love your username. You have no idea how wonderful the phrase "Velvet Rose Petals" goes with the picture of piano keys.
Shya
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If you had put your SN in the AN, that would be helpful. I like this though. Good option choice. Thanks for entering.
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thank you
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