maybe i was made to break
but i refuse
i wont let you break me
you may beat me
you may kill me
but even upon my death bed
i will look you in the eyes
and never shed a tear
i will look into your eyes
and show you the defiance i feel
you can try with all of your might
you will never break me
i am too wild
too independant
too free
you can never break me
so have fun with your toture
and my pain
i will never once say a word
i will never once wince from the pain
i will never show you the way you are killing me
i will never allow you to break me
even upon my death bed
i will look you in the eyes
and show you the defiance i feel
Author notes
i am too wild to be broken... just a thought i guess..
A contest entry
- Almost Anything by poets whisper.
550 points, ended November 11, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - One day you'll forget about me by WishMeAway--x.
800 points, ended November 25, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts???
Comments
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This is intensely emotional, and I am shicked it didn't place in the contest. Bets of luck in future endeavors!
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strong words
I think its a very strong peom and full of emotion. I think its perfect the way it is! i Loved the line ' I will never show you the way you are killing me' very strong...
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aaahhhh......another great one!!
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